He strode silently, regretfully, into the ever-darkening room. It was just another offset of her puzzling, maze-like mansion of a home, though he visits werent frequent, or often enough, to really justify its title as such. This, however, was a special day, depending on how you interpreted it.
He knew he should have knocked, instead of just barging in on her, but he also realized that she wouldnt have acknowledged it anyway. Though he was afraid to venture across the vicinity of her room, mainly for the reason that he didnt know how to comfort her. Instead, he merely lingered in the doorway, her doorway, glancing around the room, trying to stall the inevitable, until he finally couldnt prevent his eyes from resting upon her.
She sat silently, nearly silhouetted, in her bright window, which looked rather obscure in her now Endarkened room. However, he could still see that she looked extravagant as always. Her long, black hair was curled, for once, and had been fashioned into a very flattering up-do. Her makeup was exquisite, though a little risqué, almost bordering on gothic, as was per usual, and her preference. She also wore a long black dress, though it was practically hidden by her best trench coat, but even that couldnt hide the combat boots she had chosen for today.
She slowly turned her pale, but still beautiful face towards him, but he could tell that she wasnt really looking at him, rather through him. He definitely knew what she was thinking though; this was a day that she was expected to show her weakness, and she just couldnt do that.
Hey, weve got to go. Were late as it is. Lexi said on her way through the rest of the house.
After Lexi had definitely scurried off, she remained in the window for a few moments longer, before making her way heavily to the door. She probably felt like she was wading through her misery today, or so he figured.
She had hesitated before she reached the door, but he could see that she didnt have the heart to look up at him.
He could have sworn that she had whispered, I love you, shortly after she had passed by him, but he thought a more appropriate dismissal would have been, I Blame You.














Comments
lovely,
thanks for dedicating it to me, and all the others^^
And you're so welcome, I know it's not really much, but I thought you deserved something. Escpecially since you cared enough to say something about it
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Yes, Princess, a thoroughbred artist: a poet with no poems, a painter with no pictures, a musician with no music. I despise ready... made art, the banal result of vulgar effort. My life is my work and dedicated to my love for you.
i wanted o scram at you not to do it XD.
and reassurance is most needed in a time like this,
it will repel feelings of going forward with the acts.
I agree though, I probably would have lost it if I didn't have somebody there to reassure me, like you
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Yes, Princess, a thoroughbred artist: a poet with no poems, a painter with no pictures, a musician with no music. I despise ready... made art, the banal result of vulgar effort. My life is my work and dedicated to my love for you.
For something so short it really spoke volumes, emotions, and with only minor grammatical mistakes I have to say bravo.
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we both have a family who doesn't understand and isn't there for us,
well my mom does care, but most of the time.. i don't see it, i only see her as a nuisance now. > for all the times she hurt me deeply.
so yes, i really only have you guys here^^
But hey, the best people are here
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Yes, Princess, a thoroughbred artist: a poet with no poems, a painter with no pictures, a musician with no music. I despise ready... made art, the banal result of vulgar effort. My life is my work and dedicated to my love for you.
Thank you though
But uhm, would you mind pointing out those grammatical errors? I understand if you don't though
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Yes, Princess, a thoroughbred artist: a poet with no poems, a painter with no pictures, a musician with no music. I despise ready... made art, the banal result of vulgar effort. My life is my work and dedicated to my love for you.
But there is a few errors in there-
"though he visits werent frequent, or often enough,"
should be
"though his visits weren't frequent, or often enough"
and
"which looked rather obscure in her now Endarkened room" seems a bit iffy to me, Endarkened doesn't need a capital letter and I think it should be "which looked rather obscure in her darkened room"
and "I Blame You" should be "I blame you", but you might have done that on purpose for emphasis, I dunno.
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